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Natyr Lucio

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: he plays with fire

    Yeah, so the "upside umop" thing, that was incredibly original. Kudos to you for that. I loved the romance in the story, and I really like the realistic addition, that ...

    Dec 10, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My mystique groom

    Agreed, it was beautiful. However, I was able to provide some criticism. Your rhyme scheme, though cleverly placed in some areas, was choppy in others. Also, that line, "Fall for ...

    Dec 10, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Apocalyptic Smush

    This evoked very tasteful images, and I say tasteful under several different contexts. It was a wonderful poem, and just because of my predisposition to honor original flow patterns as ...

    Dec 5, 2005


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings